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graph shows the data of water consumption of three sectors.

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the given pie chart shows the comparison of water consumption in three sectors namely agriculture, domestic and industry while the bar chart illustrates the water usage of four countries for those sectors in the year 2000. The units are given in percentages. the most striking feature in the chart is agriculture has been used almost two-third of all sectors which was the highest amount. (70%)India, China and New Zealand contributed to this by 92%, 69%, and 44% respectively. Conversely, Canadians utilized water for agriculture minimum with 8%. 22% of water was used in industries. For further clarification, Canada became the highest consumer with 80% while 3% of the neglectable amount used by Indians for the same purpose. New Zealand leading the water usage for domestic requirements. The total water usage for domestic was 8% which is the lowest amount as the other three countries did not use it considerably. Overall, all other three countries, except Canada, were agricultural countries as they wanted more water. Canada was industrialized and as result they use huge amount of water for that sector.
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the comparison of
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consumption in three
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sectors
namely
agriculture, domestic and industry while the bar chart illustrates the
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usage of four
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for those
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sectors
in the year 2000. The units are
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given
in percentages.
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the
most striking feature in the chart is agriculture has been
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used
almost two-third of all
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sectors
which was the highest
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amount
. (70%)India, China and New Zealand contributed to this by 92%, 69%, and 44%
respectively
.
Conversely
, Canadians utilized
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water
for agriculture minimum with 8%. 22% of
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water
was
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used
in industries. For
further
clarification, Canada became the highest consumer with 80% while 3% of the
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neglectable
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amount
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used
by Indians for the same purpose. New Zealand leading the
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water
usage for domestic requirements. The total
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water
usage for domestic was 8% which is the lowest
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amount
as the other three
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countries
did not
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it
considerably
.
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, all other three
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countries
, except Canada, were agricultural
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as they wanted more
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. Canada
was industrialized
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huge
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