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Mobile Phone Advantage and Disadvantage

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Mobile Phone is important part of life. Mobile can connect two persons if they are far away from each other. in-fact mobile play very important part in emergency. Today we are Going to discuss its advantage and Disadvantage as well. First of all we will talk about advantage of mobile. First advantage of mobile is that you can call anyone in any case of emergency For example if you are suffering from any pain and you can't go to hospital by yourself you can simply call emergency number like we have 1122 than they will come to your door step and they will take you to Hospital. Second advantage of mobile is Navigation system. For example if you are going anywhere and you don't know the exact way of that place. than simply we have to open Google map and start the navigation system we will reach to our place.

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