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Three maps about the changes in Meadowside Village and Fonton between three different periods of time

Three maps about the changes in Meadowside Village and Fonton between three different periods of time GJ2mg
The maps beneath illustrate how Meadowside village and Fonton, were developed between three different periods of time (1962, 1985 and the present). Overall, a great transformation can be seen over the years, being Meadowside at the beginning an undeveloped area separated from the city and then an expanded zone with several new constructions. Firsly, a lack of development in Meadowside can be observed. The village was totally secluded from Fonton, having only a small road running through it from southwest to the northeast, while Fonton had a rail line running through the northwest to the southeast of the city. Subsequently, during 1985 there was a huge transformation in Meadowside. The most noticeable additions were the leisure center, housing state and super-store, as well as a new paved road connecting Fonton with the village. The leisure complex was located in the northeast, opposite to the housing state, whereas the super-store was located down the housing estate crossing the road. Currently, the land has been expanded and Meadowside is now a suburb of Fonton. There is a new train station and therefore a new rail line that connects with the old one and goes to the city. A hotel and a business park have been built next to the train station, being the hotel on top of it and the business park underneath.
The maps beneath illustrate how
Meadowside
village and
Fonton
,
were developed
between three
different
periods of time (1962, 1985 and the present).

Overall
, a great transformation can be
seen
over the years, being
Meadowside
at the beginning an undeveloped area separated from the city and then an expanded zone with several
new
constructions.

Firsly
, a lack of development in
Meadowside
can
be observed
. The village was
totally
secluded from
Fonton
, having
only
a
small
road running through it from southwest to the northeast, while
Fonton
had a rail line running through the northwest to the southeast of the city.

Subsequently
, during 1985 there was a huge transformation in
Meadowside
. The most noticeable additions were the leisure center, housing state and super-store,
as well
as a
new
paved road connecting
Fonton
with the village. The leisure complex
was located
in the northeast, opposite to the housing state, whereas the super-store
was located
down the housing estate crossing the road.

Currently
, the land has
been expanded
and
Meadowside
is
now
a suburb of
Fonton
. There is a
new
train station and
therefore
a
new
rail line that connects with the
old
one and goes to the city. A hotel and a business park have
been built
next
to the train station, being the hotel on top of it and the business park underneath.
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