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steel rods are manufactured in the furniture industry

steel rods are manufactured in the furniture industry 6dL9G

The chart demonstrates how to create steel rods through various processes. Overall, the process is divided into 11 steps start from what the raw material until the inspection step. Firstly, the substance to built the steel rods is iron ore, yellow ore, and carbon. Put them into a liquefaction gap with a temperature around 1300-1500°C so the raw material is melting. Then place them on the smelting cabin to get some amelioration. Put the candescent metal into ingot by pouring machine. After that, connect to a colling reservoir to make the candescent cool where the temperature is around 60-100°C. After that, the metal is passed through nozzles to strand casting. Then, find the precise size, rolled it, and then fix the shape by heat treatment. Furthermore, monitors the surface of strands by measuring automaton and do the cutting step. After the strands get cut into the exact size, do stamping ID number and get the inspection.

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 the inspection. 