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The maps show a renovation of the park in Canada.

The maps show a renovation of the park in Canada. Ky3x0

These two maps illustrate a park in Canada in 1995 and after a renovation project in 2015. Look at the map before the renovation, the park has just a parking area, campsite, in the west of the park, the information area, in the left of the river, and the marina. But in 2015, the park was reconstructed, It has walking and biking ways, from the bus stop in the north of the park to another bus stop near the marina. Moreover, the park has been built the bus route from the shuttle bus stop across the river to the parking car on another side of the park. Furthermore, there are expand the marina and build one more campsite on the right side of the marina. In the centre of the park, it has a cafe next to the information area which was moved from the north down to the centre nearby the river. On building which has remained the same from 1995, for example, the waterfall and hills in the north, and also highway number 25 which across the park from the north to the south. Overall, the maps compare the changes of Canada's park both before and after the renovation.

These two maps illustrate a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 in Canada in 1995 and after a renovation project in 2015.

Look at the map This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the renovation, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a parking area, campsite, in the west of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, the information area, in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of the river, and the marina. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 in 2015, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
was reconstructed
, It has walking and biking ways, from the bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
north
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 to another bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 near the marina.  Moreover
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has been built
 the bus route from the shuttle bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 across the river to the parking car on another side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. Furthermore
, there are Consider using a past participle here: "expanded".expanded
expand
 the marina and build one more campsite on the right side of the marina. In the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, it has a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
next
 to the information area which was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
north
 down to the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 nearby the river.

On building which has remained the same from 1995, for example
, the waterfall and hills in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
north
, and also
 highway number 25 which across the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
north
 to the south.

Overall
, the maps compare the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 of Canada's park both This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and after the renovation. 