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The man made Process chart show the manufacture of chocolates

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Rendered man made process chart show the how the manufacture of chocolates, which involve the distnict stages. it can be observed that in the first stage start from the coco tree ground in America America and Indonesia at ripe red pods. Then the pods harvested in white coco beans. furthermore, the been farmented and separate in the sun to dry before reaching step. After that, the bean put in the large sacks. Moving further, the beans transported in factory by trucks and trains. Moreover, the beens are roast with the help of roasted at 3. 50 c. corres pordingly, beans are crushed. The after part of beans are pressed and connected with liquid chocolate. In the last stage, the chocolate is ready to be delivered to the consumers in market. overall, there are 9 stages in the man-made process and process start the coco beans grown in America and end the chocolate ready for their all sale. All stages are mandatory.
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the coco
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the chocolate ready for their all sale. All
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IELTS academic The man made Process chart show the manufacture of chocolates

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  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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