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The table shows the number of people who visited twelve paid-admission attractions in the UK between 1999 and 2000.

The table shows the number of people who visited twelve paid-admission attractions in the UK between 1999 and 2000. 8LGOP
The table displays how many people visited 12 paid-entry attractions in the UK during 1999 and 2000. Unquestionably, London has the most popular tourist attractions in the world. Between 1999 and 2000, two out of twelve attractions experienced increased visitation, while two witnessed decreases. Moreover, two sites that started in 2000 garnered the most traffic. In 1999, Alton Towers was the world's most visited attraction with 2, 650, 000 people. It was replaced by the Millenium Dome, a new attraction that debuted in 2000 and is anticipated to draw over six million visitors annually. The British Airways London Eye, which opened in 2000, received over three million visitors in its first year. Conversely, the Canterbury Cathedral had a little drop in visits from over 1. 3 million to over 1. 26 million, making it the country's least visited attraction in 2000. The percentage of people who visited Flamingo Land Theme Park and Zoo climbed from 7% last year, when it was the least visited place in the country. According to museum data, visitors to the Victoria & Albert Museum rose 7. 4% in 2000.
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12 paid-entry
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in the UK during 1999 and 2000.

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, London has the most popular tourist
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attractions
in the world. Between 1999 and 2000, two out of twelve
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experienced increased visitation, while two witnessed decreases.
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, two sites that
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in 2000 garnered the most traffic.

In 1999, Alton Towers was the world's most
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with 2, 650, 000
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. It
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Millenium
Dome, a new
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that debuted in 2000 and
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six
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visitors
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. The British Airways London Eye, which opened in 2000, received
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three
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visitors in its
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, the Canterbury Cathedral had a
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drop in visits from
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1. 3
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to
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1. 26
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, making it the country's least
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in 2000.

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Flamingo Land Theme Park and Zoo climbed from 7% last year, when it was the least
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place in the country. According to museum data, visitors to the Victoria & Albert Museum rose 7. 4% in 2000.
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