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The charts provide information about the survey of adult education where bar chart depicts the causes of choosing adult education. The pie chart demonstrates how cost should be bear among public on people's perspective. Overall, interest in subject and to gain qualification are top reasons that invoke adults to study, meanwhile, 'to meet people' has been chosen by least amount of people regarding the survey. On the pie chart the bigger part of adult education expense should be carried out by individual. In terms of data grown people opt for interest in subject 40% and to gain qualification 38% as major cause to study. Although next three causes with a percentage respectively 22%, 20% and 20% are analogous to each other. Hence only 9% adults select to meet up as a valid unification which is the lowest among all reason. In regard to sharing the expenditure the big portion of cost should be carried out by individual 40%. In a similar way employer would bear 35% of the total cost. Therefore, the rest 25% need to be shared by the Taxpayers.

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adults
 to study, meanwhile, 'to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
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people
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 the bigger part of adult education expense should be carried
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people
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only
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adults
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 up as a valid unification which is the lowest among all reason.

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big
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In a similar way
 employer would bear 35% of the total cost. Therefore
, the rest 25% need to be shared
 by the Taxpayers. 