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This six pie charts illustrate the percentage of water consumed for distinct purposes in six areas of the universe which are industrial use, agriculture use, and domestic use. Overall, it can be observed that mostly the percentage of H2O for agriculture use is greatest and domestic usage follows the same pattern and have taken second-most highest proportion as compared to others. In terms of North America, the figure of water for industries is nearly half including 39% for agriculture and mole fraction used by domestic, moreover, in South America, nearly three quarter of water invested for farming, and 10-19% in industries and domestic respectively. Furthermore, in Europe, over half of water depletion can be seen nearly a third proportion in agricultural land. In addition, the analysis of Africa Central Asia, and South Asia delineate that about 80% to 84% of Water used in agriculture, just a small fraction in industries and domestic
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consumed for distinct purposes in six areas of the universe which are industrial
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,
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agriculture
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, and
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domestic
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.

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is greatest and
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usage follows the same pattern and have taken second-most
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proportion as compared to others.

In terms of North America, the figure of
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for industries is
nearly
half including 39% for
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agriculture
and mole fraction
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,
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, in South America,
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invested for farming, and 10-19% in industries and
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respectively
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Furthermore
, in Europe, over half of
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depletion can be
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a third proportion in agricultural land.

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IELTS academic Sometimes, however, it seems a bit more complicated than this.

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4 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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