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Write 150 words. Recycling plastic bottles

Write 150 words. Recycling plastic bottles KlR7M
The diagram provides how recycling plastic bottles are produced. Overall, it is apparent that it is a multistep cyclical process which includes nine steps. The first step starts with dumping the debris and the process ends with the production of new items. First and foremost people dump their used products in a recycle bin. Then these are carried by a designated vehicle, to a recycling Center. Here, plastie items are manually sorted by hand. Compressing into blocks makes the fourth stage of this process. After that, these blocks are passed through a crusher. In the next stage, crushed particles are washed and after producing pellets, heat is given. Subsequently end items are produced from the raw material and the cycle begins again.
The diagram provides how recycling plastic bottles
are produced
.

Overall
, it is apparent that it is a multistep cyclical process which includes nine steps. The
first
step
starts
with dumping the debris and the process ends with the production of new items.

First
and foremost
people
dump their
used
products in a recycle bin. Then these
are carried
by a designated vehicle, to a recycling Center. Here,
plastie
items are
manually
sorted by hand.

Compressing into blocks
makes
the fourth stage of this process. After that, these blocks
are passed
through a crusher. In the
next
stage, crushed particles
are washed
and after producing pellets, heat is
given
.
Subsequently
end
items
are produced
from the raw material and the cycle
begins
again.
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IELTS academic Write 150 words. Recycling plastic bottles

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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