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Forms of Transportation and how did they change

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The chart shows the prices per kilometer for each form of transportation while the table informs us about average journey times before and after the improvements done. Bus offers us the cheapest price, 0, 4€ per kilometer. However, it takes the longest time before and after the improvements. The improvements have lowered the average journey time from 28minutes to 22 minutes. Tram is a little bit more expensive than bus with a 0, 5€ per kilometer price tag. On the other hand, tram is a little more faster than bus. After the improvements, tram takes approximately 16 mins. Taxi has a colossal price differency with tram and bus. You have to pay nearly 1 dollar more for each kilometer. Altough it is clearly the fastest form of transportation. Even the improvements increased it’s average joruney time 3 minutes, it takes nearly 12minutes. The biggest journey time increase has seen in cars, from 10 minutes to 15 minutes. Overall, the more your transportation gets economic the slower it gets.
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per kilometer for each form of transportation while the table informs us about average journey
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times
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have lowered the average journey
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from 28minutes to 22 minutes. Tram is a
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. Taxi has a colossal
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3 minutes, it takes
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in cars, from 10 minutes to 15 minutes.

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economic the slower it
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