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Two methods of collecting water

Two methods of collecting water 73Npk

The diagram show how to collect water by the method of swing basket and rope an bucket. As the diagrams show us, there are two methods of collecting water which one of them is swing basket. We use this method to collect water from one or two meters depth. Swing basket which is made of bamboo or leather, bind with ropes and caught from two side by two person. Farmers utilize this method to pouring water to irrigation channel. It is difficult because it needs two person who should use much energy to do that. On the other hand, rope and bucket method utilize for accumulating water from 50 meters depth by make use of cow on the slope which tries to go straight and pull bucket up with rollers and pulley support. However, rope and bucket method uses to collecting water from 50 meters depth but, it is more tough than another method.

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