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The pie chart below gives information on the United Arab Emirates’ government spending in 2000.

The pie chart below gives information on the United Arab Emirates’ government spending in 2000. NljWy
The chart examines the total amount of money the United Arab Emirates’ government consumed in 2000. All in all, it is clear that the government spent the most money on social security, while the least on transportation. The largest rate of the expense was social security, which was 100 billion. The second was health and personal social services, however, its specific figure was 53 billion, which was roughly a half of the biggest one. Considering the total budget in 2000 was AED 315 billion, it is clear that the former and latter accounted for about a half of the total money because their sum was 153 billion. From this information, it seemed that the government mainly put effort into the social services. 38 billion was spent on education and this was the third biggest one. 23 billion was used for debt interest and other expenditures respectively, additionally this figure was almost quadruple of social security. The other each project consumed between 13 and 22. The smallest rate, 9 billion, was occupied by transportation. To sum up, about one half of the budget was spent on just two purposes while another half was divided into eight sectors.
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consumed in 2000. All in all, it is
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that the
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spent the most money on
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security, while the least on transportation.

The largest rate of the expense was
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security, which was 100
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. The second was health and personal
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services,
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, its specific figure was 53
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, which was roughly a
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of the biggest one. Considering the total budget in 2000
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315
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, it is
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that the former and latter accounted for about a
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of the total money
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their sum was 153
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. From this information, it seemed that the
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mainly
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services.

38
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was spent
on education and this was the third biggest one. 23
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was
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for debt interest and other expenditures
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this figure was almost quadruple of
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security. The other each project consumed between 13 and 22. The smallest rate, 9
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of the budget
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two purposes while another
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