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platforms have no security locks allowing criminals to enter,
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including introduction of low to
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IELTS academic Social media has become a real problem for young

Academic
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1 paragraphs
302 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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