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Skip to main content Writing task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1 Type your essay below and click Submit for evaluation You have 20 minutes to complete Writing task 1. The timer will start when you start typing. The pictures below represents the features for a wave-energy machine and its corresponding location. The machine comprises of two Chambers of which the lower chamber is situated in the sea level. Waves is directed in the sea level into the lower chamber it flows into the upper chamber and escapes into the atmosphere. Atmospheric air from the atmosphere is directed towards the upper chamber through a vent and flows to lower cahmber into the water level. The upper chamber comprise of a turbine which is controlled by an e

Skip to main content Writing task 1 The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. awyq7
The pictures below represents the features for a wave-energy machine and its corresponding location. The machine comprises of two Chambers of which the lower chamber is situated in the sea level. Waves is directed in the sea level into the lower chamber it flows into the upper chamber and escapes into the atmosphere. Atmospheric air from the atmosphere is directed towards the upper chamber through a vent and flows to lower chamber into the water level. The upper chamber comprise of a turbine which is controlled by an electricity generator which aids in changing of air pressure in the wave machine. Wave- energy machine location is installed at two sites which is dependent on the amount of output it produces. High installation cost is responsible in yielding large waves - high outputs while that of low installation costs produces small waves - low output. Both low and high installation cost wave machines are powered using wave energy and are both situated at the sea.
The pictures below represents the features for a wave-energy
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comprises of
two
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Chambers
of which the lower
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chamber
is situated
in the sea level.

Waves
is directed
in the sea level into the lower
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chamber
it flows into the upper
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chamber
and escapes into the atmosphere.

Atmospheric air from the atmosphere
is directed
towards the upper
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chamber
through a vent and flows to lower
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chamber
into the water level.

The upper
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chamber
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comprise of
a turbine which
is controlled
by an electricity generator which aids in changing of air pressure in the
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wave
machine.

Wave- energy
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machine
location
is installed
at two sites which is dependent on the amount of output it produces. High installation cost is responsible in yielding large
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waves
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high outputs while that of low installation costs produces
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small
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waves
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low output.

Both low and high installation cost
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wave
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machines
are powered
using
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wave
energy and are both situated at the sea.
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IELTS academic Skip to main content Writing task 1 The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
164 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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