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The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010

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The supplied data gives information on the average household spendings in Japan and Malaysia in 2010. Overall, money spent on housing, transport, food, health care and other goods and services are nearly the same in the both countries only with little differences in 2 categories(health care and other good and services). The 50% of the expenditures in Japan belonged to housing and transport with 21% and 29% respectively. The remaining 50% was dealt between the other 3 categories. The most little part concerned to health and care with 6%. Health and care took 20%, however; this percentage was higher for 4% for food. In Malaysia wastes on food and health care occupied more than 50% of the proportion with 27% and 34% respectively. Other good and services followed them with 26%. Outgoings for transport was 10%. The remaining 3% was owned by health care costs which was the tiniest part.

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