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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994 according to United Nations statistics

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TThe given table illustrates information about social and economic indicators for four different countries namely, Canada, Japan, Peru and Angola in 1994. The indicators reported by United Nations statistics are related to annual income per person, life expectancy at birth, daily calorie supply per person and adult literacy rate. Overall, it seems that the data for all indicators in Canada and Japan were higher compared with the other countries. Additionally, Angola had the lowest figures for all indicators. Japan had the highest annual income per person and life expectancy at birth ($US1570 and 78 years, respectively), while the lowest numbers were for Angola ($130 and 47 years, respectively). The daily calorie supply per person was quite higher in Canada (3326 calorie) than in Japan (2846 calorie). Again the Angola showed the lowest figures with 1749 calorie: however, the numbers for Peru was 1927. In adult literacy rate there was no difference between Canada and Japan, both of them was 99%, followed by Peru 68% and Angola 34%.

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