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shows the number of single-family homes constructed in the United States by region over a period of six years

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The line graph given exhibits the amount of new residential built in four regions, northeast, mid west, south, and west during the time period from 2006 to 2012. Overall, the number of single family homes in south of united states swelled, while the quantity of homes which was built in mid west surged. Looking at the line representing construction of homes in south of united states, there began much higher than mid west homes, with 900, 000 homes in 2006. This number plunged incredibly to almost 300, 000 homes in the following four years. However, Before swelling by leaps and bounds to almost 300, 000homes in 2012, there was a noticeable slump in the amount of mid west homes to almost 300, 000 homes in 2010. As to the mid east region, it can be seen that there began at around 200, 000 homes in 2006, then there was negligible staggering under 100, 000 homes, which was the rock bottom during the period presented. Finally, the number of homes in west region and North experienced minimal fall to nearly 90, 000 homes in 2012.
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exhibits the amount of new residential built in four regions, northeast, mid west, south, and west during the time period from 2006 to 2012.
Overall
, the number of single family
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homes
in south of
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united states
swelled, while the quantity of
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which
was built
in mid west surged.

Looking at the line representing construction of
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homes
in south of
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united states
, there began much higher than mid west
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homes
, with 900, 000
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homes
in 2006. This number plunged
incredibly
to almost 300, 000
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homes
in the following four years.
However
,
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Before
swelling by leaps and bounds to almost 300,
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000homes
in 2012, there was a noticeable slump in the amount of mid west
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homes
to almost 300, 000
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homes
in 2010.

As to the mid east region, it can be
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that there began at around 200, 000
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homes
in 2006, then there was negligible staggering under 100, 000
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homes
, which was the rock bottom during the period presented.
Finally
, the number of
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homes
in west region and North experienced minimal fall to
nearly
90, 000
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homes
in 2012.
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