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The diagram show one method of creating ceramic pots.

The diagram show one method of creating ceramic pots. 9QJXj

The picture illustrates one particular way of creating ceramic pots. In general, it can be seen that this process has a total of 11 steps, beginning with collecting the raw materials and ending with the production of the finished pots. The method of manufacturing ceramic pots starts with digging the raw materials out of the ground by the digging machine. Next, they are transported by a truck to the factories. After these materials have been crushed, they are mixed with water in a suitable ratio. Then this mixture that resembles clay is poured into the moulds. Depending on the purpose of the workers, the moulds have different shapes. Once the moulds have been filled, they are dried from 4 to 6 hours to make the assembled clay pots. Following this, these pots are placed in an oven and heated at a temperature of 1000 degrees Celsius. Under this temperature, they are hardened and fixed into the final shape. After this, they are coloured and heated in another oven for colour firing. Finally, the result of this step is finished ceramic pots.

The picture illustrates one particular way of creating ceramic pots.

In general
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seen
 that this process has a total of 11 steps, beginning with collecting the raw materials and ending with the production of the finished pots.

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pots
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starts
 with digging the raw materials out of the ground by the digging machine. Next
, they are transported
 by a truck to the factories. After these materials have been crushed
, they are mixed
 with water in a suitable ratio. Then this mixture that resembles clay is poured
 into the Possible spelling mistake. 'moulds' is British English.molds
moulds
. Depending on the purpose of the workers, the Possible spelling mistake. 'moulds' is British English.molds
moulds
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different
 shapes.

Once the Possible spelling mistake. 'moulds' is British English.molds
moulds
 have been filled
, they are dried
 from 4 to 6 hours to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the assembled clay You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
. Following this, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
are placed
 in an oven and heated at a temperature of 1000 degrees Celsius. Under this temperature, they are hardened
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 into the final shape. After this, they are Possible spelling mistake. 'coloured' is British English.colored
coloured
 and heated in another oven for Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 firing. Finally
, the result of this step is finished
 ceramic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
. 