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Shows a Civic Centre Between the Present and Its Future Plan

Shows a Civic Centre Between the Present and Its Future Plan OlEEd

The maps illustrate proposed changes which will be taken place in the civic center that will be more renovative. Overall, it is expected that more refreshment facilities will be preferred for the future plan along with the relocation of the other amenities. At this moment, the car park is situated to the northeast corner of the center that will be converted into a cafe. Similarly, another car park on the northwest side will be replaced with hotel and restaurant. On the other hand, the cinema and shopping center will be remained in the same place. For future development, an underground library will be developed at the place of council offices which will be relocated at the exhibition site. As town hall will be replaced to the middle position, the underground car park will be constructed at that place. Furthermore, the library to the southwest corner will be replaced by the exhibition. Therefore, the city center will be witnessed the development of more facilities than at the present time.

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 that more refreshment facilities will be preferred
 for the future plan along with the relocation of the other amenities. At this moment, the car park is situated
 to the northeast corner of the center that will be converted
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cafe
. Similarly
, another car park on the northwest side will be replaced
 with hotel and restaurant. On the other hand
, the cinema and shopping center will be remained
 in the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
. For future development, an underground library will be developed
 at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 of council offices which will be relocated
 at the exhibition site. As town hall will be replaced
 to the middle position, the underground car park will be constructed
 at that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
. Furthermore
, the library to the southwest corner will be replaced
 by the exhibition. Therefore
, the city center will be witnessed
 the development of more facilities than at the present time. 