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demographic trends (Scotland)

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the line graph compares the percentage of birth, population growth, death rates in Scotland over a period of 80 years. Overall, the birth rate was by far the most demographic trend over the period shown while the death rate showed a slight rise last year. In 1940, the birth rate showed the highest percentage of demographic trends in Scotland at about 2, 5% a year. the Population growth was the least percentage of showing roughly 1, 0% while the death rate saw about 1, 5% of demographic trends. Just twenty years later all trends declined under 1, 5% of demographic trends. Between 1955 and 1960, the birth rate fell dramatically to 1, 0%, by contrast, the population growth reached a peak of 1, 5% and dropped unexpectedly to under 1, 0% then dived minimally to 0%. The death rate fell under 0, 5% in 1955, remained relatively stable by 2010, and showed the highest demographic trends of more than 0, 5% in 2020.
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, population growth, death
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in Scotland over a period of 80 years.
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, the
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was by far the most
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over the period shown while the death
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a slight rise last
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. In 1940, the
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the highest percentage of
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in Scotland at about 2, 5% a
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.
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Population growth was the least percentage of showing roughly 1, 0% while the death
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declined under 1, 5% of
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. Between 1955 and 1960, the
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fell
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to under 1, 0% then dived
minimally
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fell under 0, 5% in 1955, remained
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of more than 0, 5% in 2020.
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IELTS academic demographic trends (Scotland)

Academic
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1 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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