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Should the success of a country be measured in terms of standard of living of its people or in terms of its economic development? State your opinion

Should the success of a country be measured in terms of standard of living of its people or in terms of its economic development? State your opinion 2RdB6
Nowadays we have developed countries and more developing countries. They each have different priorities, different governments and cultureas. In this essay, I will look at these differences and discuss their success. Firstly folks feel themselvesthemself normally and development in a country automatically influences people to enjoy a high standard of living. But unfortunately many countries in the world are tackling poverty. Second, most first world countries have their improvement in the high standard of living their highest priority. They are not obsessed with technological industry and services like medical aid and pension funds. Furthermore these countries are wealthy and folks grateful for their living high standards. Lastly many developing third countries place a higher priority on economic and technological development than on the improvement of he massive income gained from the oil, some Arab and African countries have been able to develop investigate technological projects and glamours cities. However, large parts of their populations continue to live in miserable poverty. Other countries are known to spend massive amounts on developing nuclear weapons while the greatest part of their populations do not have access to basic goods and services. So I have noted the difference in approach in two types of countries. In conclusion, I Believe developing countries should change their priorities.
Nowadays we have developed
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countries
and more
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developing
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countries
. They each have
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different
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priorities
,
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governments
and
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. In this essay, I will look at these differences and discuss their success.

Firstly
folks feel
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themselvesthemself
normally
and development in a
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country
automatically
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people
to enjoy a high standard of living.
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unfortunately
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many
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countries
in the world are tackling poverty.

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world
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countries
have their improvement in the high standard of living their highest
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priority
. They are not obsessed with technological industry and services like medical aid and pension funds.
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Furthermore
these
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are wealthy and folks grateful for their living high standards.

Lastly
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many
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developing
third
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countries
place a higher
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priority
on economic and technological development than on the improvement of
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massive income gained from the oil,
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some
Arab and African
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countries
have been able to develop investigate technological projects and glamours cities.
However
, large parts of their populations continue to
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live
in miserable poverty. Other
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countries
are known
to spend massive amounts on
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developing
nuclear weapons while the greatest part of their populations do not have access to basic
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goods
and services.

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So
I have noted the difference in approach in two types of
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countries
.
In conclusion
, I Believe
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developing
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countries
should
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change
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priorities
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IELTS academic Should the success of a country be measured in terms of standard of living of its people or in terms of its economic development? State your opinion

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  American English
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211 words
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