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The table depicts the results of a survey done in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010 in percentage about various aspects of a university. Generally, all the ratings were above 50% apart from range of modules offered which was the lowest in all the three years. 2010 generally had the highest rating across all the aspects. To begin with, teaching quality depicted an upward trend across the three years by 4% from 65% to 69%. In addition, electronic resources survey increased a great deal by a whooping 43%, making it the most improved rating from 45% in 2000 to 88% in 2010. However, building/teaching facilities remained constant across the three years at 77%. On the other hand, print resources rating increased to 89% in 2005 from 84% in 2000, then slightly dropped by 1% in 2010. Furthermore, the range of modules offered had the lowest rating among all aspects in the survey, showing a downward trajectory with 32% in 2000 and 27% in 2010.
The table depicts the results of a survey done in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010 in percentage about various aspects of a university.

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were above 50% apart from range of modules offered which was the lowest in all the three years. 2010
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across all the aspects.

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from 45% in 2000 to 88% in 2010.
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increased to 89% in 2005 from 84% in 2000, then
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among all aspects in the survey, showing a downward trajectory with 32% in 2000 and 27% in 2010.
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IELTS academic results of a survey done

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4 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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