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Pie chart and bar graph show the big 6 emitters pf carbon dioxide

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A glance at the pie chart provided reveals the percentages of carbon dioxide emitted by 6 biggest polluters in 2015, on the other hand the presented bar graph demonstrates the top 6 emitters per person in the same year. Overall we can see that China was the country that emitted the most Co2 in 2015 even though the top emission per capita was in Saudi Arabia. According to the pie chart it is apparent that China was responsible for 31% of the carbon dioxide emissions in 2015, followed by 17% produced by the USA. India, Russia, Japan and Germany present approximately the fifth of the carbon dioxide producers, and the rest of the Co2 cale from the other countries of the world. In terms of the emissions per person the bar graph shows that Saudi Arabians produce 16 metric tonnes of Co2, come next Canadians, USA citizens and Australians emit around 15 metric tonnes while South Koreans and Russians accounted exactly 12 and 10 metric tonnes of Co2 emissions respectively. Also note worthy is the fact that although China was the top country that produced Co2 it did not appear in the higher emitters per person and vice versa with Saudi Arabia.
A glance at the pie chart provided reveals the percentages of carbon dioxide emitted by 6 biggest polluters in 2015,
on the other hand
the presented bar graph demonstrates the top 6 emitters per person in the same year.
Overall
we can
see
that China was the country that emitted the most Co2 in 2015
even though
the top
emission
per capita was in Saudi Arabia.

According to the pie chart it is apparent that China was responsible for 31% of the carbon dioxide
emissions
in 2015, followed by 17% produced by the USA. India, Russia, Japan and Germany present approximately the fifth of the carbon dioxide producers, and the rest of the Co2
cale
from the other countries of the world. In terms of the
emissions
per person the bar graph
shows
that Saudi Arabians produce 16 metric tonnes of Co2,
come
next
Canadians, USA citizens and Australians emit around 15 metric tonnes while South Koreans and Russians accounted exactly 12 and 10 metric tonnes of Co2
emissions
respectively
.

Also
note worthy
is the fact that although China was the top country that produced Co2 it did not appear in the higher emitters per person and vice versa with Saudi Arabia.
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