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1. Have you ever seen a crime?

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I have always been protected by my parents, so I have never met a criminal in real life. But I've seen a lot of cases on TV and it's made me shiver with fear. Every day on TV there are many crimes mentioned which are robberies, murders and many more. I often see them do scary and unscrupulous actions. I just hope I don't encounter cases and criminals in real life. And no one wants to meet such cruel people.
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cases on TV and it's made me shiver with fear. Every day on TV there are
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many
crimes mentioned which are robberies, murders and
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many
more. I
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often
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see
them do scary and unscrupulous actions. I
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hope I don't encounter cases and criminals in real life. And no one wants to
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meet
such cruel
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people
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IELTS academic 1. Have you ever seen a crime?

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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