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Roslindale High school native languages

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The two pie charts show which kind of native languages and there percentage where spoken at Roslindale High school during two years. In these two years English remained as the most spoken native language at Roslindale High school. In the year 2005 the most spoken language was English with 65 percent while Spanish was the second most spoken native language at Roslindale High school with 20 percent. Chinese was the third most spoken native language with 10 percent and at last other native languages with 5 percent. Ten years later in 2015 some changes could be seen at the percentage of spoken native languages at Roslindale High school compared to 2005. English remained as the most spoken language however the percentage dropped by an amount of 20 percent so from 65 percent to 45 percent. Spanish as a native language increased at Roslindale High school from 20 percent in 2005 to 35 percent in 2015. Also Chinese as a native language at Roslindale High school grew to 15 percent 2015 compared to 201´05 with 10 percent. The percentage of other spoken native languages did not change in the year 2015 and stood the same as 2005 with 5 percent. Overall, these pie charts illustrate that English remains as the most spoken language at Roslindale High school but other languages such as Spanish are growing.
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2005 the most spoken
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with 20
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IELTS academic Roslindale High school native languages

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
224 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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