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regional expenditure on consumer goods

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The bar chart illustrates the expenditures on cars, computers, books, perfume, and cameras in France and the United Kingdom in sterling pounds in the year 2010. Overall, France has a downward trend in expenditure with the highest being on cars, computers, books, and cameras are the least. On the other hand, the United Kingdom expenditure on the same goods keep has cars leading then books, computers and cameras are nearly equal with perfume being the make the smallest chunk. Cars and computers make a bigger percentage in their consumptions in France by nearly 400000 sterling pounds. While books make about 300000 pounds, perfumes and cameras are the least spent on at 200000 pounds and 150000 pounds respectively. In the United Kingdom, perfumes hold the least chunk of expenditure about 100000 pounds, then cameras and computers are almost same at 250000 more pounds than former. Books were at 4 folds as perfume and the leading was cars with 50000 pounds more than it.
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books
,
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perfume
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cameras
in France and the United Kingdom in sterling pounds in the year 2010.
Overall
, France has a downward trend in
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expenditure
with the highest being on
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cars
, computers,
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books
, and
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cameras
are the least.
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, the United Kingdom
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expenditure
on the same
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cars
leading then
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books
, computers and
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cameras
are
nearly
equal with
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perfume
being the
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the smallest chunk.

Cars and computers
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a bigger percentage in their
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consumptions
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400000 sterling pounds. While
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books
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about
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300000 pounds
,
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perfumes
and
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cameras
are the least spent on at
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200000 pounds
and
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150000 pounds
respectively
. In the United Kingdom,
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perfumes
hold the least chunk of
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expenditure
about
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100000 pounds
, then
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cameras
and computers are almost same at 250000 more pounds than former.
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Books
were at 4 folds as
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perfume
and the leading was
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cars
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50000 pounds
more than it.

IELTS academic regional expenditure on consumer goods

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