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The chart below shows what sports men and women like to play in country X. Write a report to a group of health workers describing the information shown in the chart.

The chart below shows what sports men and women like to play in country X. Write a report to a group of health workers describing the information shown in the chart. kemgW
This line graph indicates the percentage of men and women who play each sport in country X. We can see that the greatest change occurred in the percentage of football while the statistic of tennis was nearly equal. According to the information, women preferred to play 4 sports more than men, which included jogging, tennis, swimming, and others. The results revealed that only 5 to 6 percent of men chose swimming. Meanwhile, women played this sport more than 15 percent. In relation to jogging percentage, the figure of women reached the peak estimated at 25 percent. Differ from the percentage of men, it was shown a little bit higher than 15. The number of men and women played tennis were between 15 and 20, which almost the same. On the other hand, men have a particular liking in Basketball, Football, and Golf more than women. There was a radical change in football. To clarify, men preferred to play this sport around 20 to 25 percent. In the meantime, less than 5 percent of women chose Football as their preference. Likewise, the information revealed that both men and women who played Basketball and golf showed practically the same variation.
This line graph indicates the
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preferred to play 4
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more than
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, which included jogging, tennis, swimming,
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5 to 6
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chose swimming. Meanwhile,
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played this
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more than 15
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. In relation to jogging
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, the figure of
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reached the peak estimated at 25
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. Differ from the
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played tennis were between 15 and 20, which almost the same.

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,
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have a particular liking in Basketball,
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, and Golf more than
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women
. There was a radical
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football
. To clarify,
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preferred to play this
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around 20 to 25
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who played Basketball and golf
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what sports men and women like to play in country X. Write a report to a group of health workers describing the information shown in the chart.

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3 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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