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Roads should be replaced by railroads.

Some people think that the replacement of public transport with passenger train need to be done immediately. While I accept to some extent that public transport is more convenient to use to reach your destination, I believe passenger transport provides more facilities in term of its speed and safety. To begin with, some individuals argue that private cars are more convenient than trains in terms of travelling. It means, with cars you can go anywhere you want in short time without scheduling. Moreover, there are many office worker whose job is far from their cities or homes which they spend several hours in traveling. Obviously, public transports are not good choice for them and they prefer using convenience of cars which have their own seat, air condition and radio to use. Thus, there are some destinations where people prefer to go by their private cars. On the other hand, supporters of the public transports think that the fast passenger trains have a great speed, so it allow people save their precious time, together with a solid time tables which prevent form delays, and it well known for its highest punctuality which is the most common aspect for individuals. Additionally, since there are no traffic lights or another vehicles on its way, accidents or crushes are not observed. For example, in the USA the rate of road accidents were very high, but to tackle this issues government replaced most of the road with subways which decreased the rate immediately. In conclusion, since to use a car to reach a destination may be more convenient, but I believe railroad is more important in many aspects.
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with passenger train need to
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is more convenient to
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to reach your destination, I believe passenger
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provides more facilities
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in term of
its speed and safety.

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individuals argue that private
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are more convenient than trains in terms of travelling. It means, with
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you can go anywhere you want in short time without scheduling.
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office
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whose job is far from their cities or homes which they spend several hours in traveling.
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public
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them and
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destinations where
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prefer to go by their private cars.

On the other hand
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passenger trains have a great speed,
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save their precious time, together with a solid
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form delays, and it
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well known
for its highest punctuality which is the most common aspect for individuals.
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, since there are no traffic lights or another vehicles on its way, accidents or crushes are not observed.
For example
, in the USA the rate of road accidents were
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high,
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to tackle this issues
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replaced most of the road with subways which decreased the rate immediately.

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, since to
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to reach a destination may be more convenient,
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IELTS academic Roads should be replaced by railroads.

Academic
  American English
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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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