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The diagram below represents the “Comparison of how urban Chinese spent across major categories in 1995 versus the spending habits in 2011”. Summarise the information given in the diagrams. Write at least 150 words.

In 1995, urban Chinese spent more on Food compare to other categories. There was slight incline and decline in other categories compared to 2011 trend. Because the people after 2011 was focusing to earn money for survival. But there is completly decline trend observed in Food comparing 1995 and 2011. Food consumption decreased by 14% moreover the contribution increased in other categories. Others category was increased compared to 1995 consumption. As there is growth in population, Resedential consumption increased by 1% due to that there is an spike in Recreation by 2%. As we observed there is a growth in population, Transporation consumption increased and people used to buy their own personal vehicles for convienence and luxury purpose. Due to release of C02 from Vehices, air pollution got increased which resulting in illness. So to get ride of that Medicine consumption hit the sky. No change in Household facilities where people replacing the old appliances, furtniture and kitchen equipment where size is compressed using advanced technology. Clothing consumption got decreased due to increased in quality and trend of clothes. We can summarize this comparison by stating that Urban consumption in 2011 is increased compared to 1995.

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people
 after 2011 was focusing to earn money for survival.

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But
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completly
 decline trend observed in Food comparing 1995 and 2011. Food You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 decreased by 14% moreover
 the contribution You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheightenedexpanded
increased
 in other categories.

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increased
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consumption
. As there is growth in population, Possible spelling mistake found.Residential
Resedential
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consumption
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increased
 by 1% due to that there is Use “a” instead of ‘an’ if the following word doesn’t start with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘a sentence’, ‘a university’.a
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 spike in Recreation by 2%.

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Transporation
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consumption
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increased
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 personal vehicles for Possible spelling mistake found.conveniencecontinence
convienence
 and luxury purpose.

Due to release of C02 from Possible spelling mistake found.Vehicles
Vehices
, air pollution This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
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increased
 which resulting in illness.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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ride
 of that Medicine You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 hit the sky.

No This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in Household facilities where This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 replacing the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 appliances, Possible spelling mistake found.furniture
furtniture
 and kitchen equipment where size is compressed
 using advanced technology. Clothing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 decreased due to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheightenedexpanded
increased
 in quality and trend of clothes.

We can summarize this comparison by stating that Urban You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 in 2011 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheightenedexpanded
increased
 compared to 1995. 