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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The provided maps illustrate the present design of a university's sport centre and how it will transform after renovation. Overall, the sport centre will be bigger and wider in the future. The projected added facilities including leisure pool changing rooms, cafe, dancing studio, sports shop and hall to the University's sports centre would make it look well developed. At present the university sports centre is a rectangular building which has outdoor courts both at its east and west. In the main building, there is 25m pool în the centre, north of the reception. There is a changing room towards the west of the pool and seating facility on the east. It also has a gym towards its North. The first noticeable change which is seen in the future plan is the addition of a leisure pool at the west, next to the changing room. There would be an additional changing room and a sports shop towards the south of the leisure pool where an outdoor court is situated now. Opposite to these two, towards the east, another changing room is planned with on adjacent cafe. The outdoor court at the east would be transformed to a sports hall and towards its east, two dance studios are planned. The next visible change is the expansion of gym towards the east,
The provided maps illustrate the present design of a university's
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sport
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centre
and how it will transform after renovation.
Overall
, the
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sport
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centre
will be bigger and wider in the future. The projected
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added
facilities including leisure
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pool
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changing
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rooms
,
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cafe
, dancing studio,
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sports
shop and hall to the University's
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sports
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centre
would
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make
it look
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well developed
.

At present the university
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sports
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centre
is a rectangular building which has outdoor courts both at its east and west. In the main building, there is
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25m
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pool
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the
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centre
, north of the reception. There is a
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changing
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room
towards the west of the
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pool
and seating facility on the east. It
also
has a gym towards its North. The
first
noticeable
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change
which is
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seen
in the future plan is the addition of a leisure
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pool
at the west,
next
to the
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changing
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room
. There would be an additional
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changing
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room
and a
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sports
shop towards the south of the leisure
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pool
where an outdoor court
is situated
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now
. Opposite to these two, towards the east, another
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changing
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room
is planned
with on adjacent
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cafe
. The outdoor court at the east would
be transformed
to a
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sports
hall and towards its east, two dance studios
are planned
. The
next
visible
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change
is the expansion of gym towards the east,
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IELTS academic The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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