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The bar chart compares the total number of users in the fitness club during the years 2016 and 2019 by comfort. Overall, there was a slight rise in the number of users in gymnasium while the number of participants in tennis court showed a significant drop over the period. According to the bar chart, the total number of users who participated in gymnasium in 2016 was 12, 000 while in 2019 the number of contributors grew sharply to 14, 500. In 2016 the number of members in the swimming pool dropped slightly to 2, 500 compared with the number of participants in 2019. the number was increased markedly above 4, 000. Although the number of users in the basket ball in 2016 showed a significant increase 8, 000, It declined marginally to 6, 400 in 2019. while in the yoga room the number of members decreased significantly in 2016, in 2019 the number showed an increase 8, 200. In the tennis courts, the total number of contributors remained stable at 500 in 2016 and 2019.

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