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information about the railway system in six cities in europe

information about the railway system in six cities in europe LwnWV

The two bar charts illustrates the statistics for railroads system in six capital cities, in term of Europe, Paris, Stockholm, Lisbon, Rome, Madrid and Berlin. It is clear that Paris has the oldest and longest railway system while Lisbon train system receives the greatest number of passengers per year. It can be seen from the graph the longest routes of Paris railway’s system in 1963 was 394 kilometers, compared to the shortest routes of Madrid stood at nearly 11 kilometers in 1981. Meanwhile the figure for Madrid was a nearly a half of Berlin routes, at around 28 kilometers. Nottably, the numbers of kilometers of routes in Stockholm in 1990, Lisbon in 1927 and Rome in 1976 was quite similar which were 199, 155 and 126 kilometers consecutively. Significantly, the number of passengers these railway systems receive each year, Lisbon had the highest with 1927 million passengers per year. By contrast, the statistic for Paris being, at 775 million people while the data for Madrid and Berlin serves lower than number of train commuters, which was 45 million and 50 million. And the figure for Stockholm standing at 1191 million, which was much higher than the number of Rome receive in a year (around 144 million).

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