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kids activity under lockdown

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the bar chart is giving information about the kids and teens activity during the lockdown. On March 2020 the boys choose to spend more time on video games while the girls choose to spent their free time on phone calls and online chatting. in April 2020 the girls on the age range of 13 to 15 years started to get involved on video games. on the main time the boys from the same age range started to practice exercise and go for long walks. the most varunable age group was kids in age range from 4 to 7. they spend the most of their time at home watching TV, because they couldn't go outside their home by themselves because their parents didn't allow them to do so due to safety reasons.

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