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The chart illustrates the export earnings of the products in one country and the table shows the percentage amount of each product in the year 2015-2016.

The chart illustrates the export earnings of the products in one country and the table shows the percentage amount of each product in the year 2015-2016. 66MoK
The chart illustrates the export earnings of the products in one country and the table shows the percentage amount of each product in the year 2015-2016. Overall, the petroleum product was one of the highest export earning product in the year 2015-2016, while Textiles was one of the lowest one throughout the year. On the other hand Textiles was one of the major export product where the rate of percentage change was high whereas, Agricultural products were one of the least one in change of values in the year 2015-2016. The graph clearly shows export earnings in Petroleum products, Engineered goods and Textiles have increased from the year 2015 to 2016, while Agricultural products are almost about the same in the year 2015-2016 in earnings. One of the other product Gems and jewellery was decreased in exports. However, the table depicts Textile was one the biggest product in terms of change in values of 15. 24%, while Agricultural products was the one of the minor product in the year 2015-2016. On the other hand, Engineered goods, Gems and jewellery and Petroleum products were placed between 1 % to 10% in terms of change in values.
The chart illustrates the
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of the
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in one country and the table
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the percentage amount of each
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product
in the
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year
2015-2016.

Overall
, the petroleum
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product
was one of the highest
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export
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earning
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product
in the
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2015-2016, while
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Textiles
was one of the lowest one throughout the
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year
.
On the other hand
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Textiles
was one of the major
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export
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product
where the rate of percentage
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change
was high whereas, Agricultural
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products
were one of the least one in
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change
of values in the
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year
2015-2016.

The graph
clearly
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earnings
in Petroleum
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products
, Engineered
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goods
and
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Textiles
have increased from the
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year
2015 to 2016, while Agricultural
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products
are almost about the same in the
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year
2015-2016 in
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. One of the other
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product
Gems and
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jewellery
was decreased
in exports.

However
, the table depicts
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Textile
was
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one
the biggest
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product
in terms of
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change
in values of 15. 24%, while Agricultural
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products
was the one of the minor
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product
in the
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year
2015-2016.
On the other hand
, Engineered
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goods
, Gems and
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jewellery
and Petroleum
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products
were placed
between 1 % to 10% in terms of
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change
in values.

IELTS academic The chart illustrates the export earnings of the products in one country and the table shows the percentage amount of each product in the year 2015-2016.

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