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The diagram explains the key stages way in which milk is manufactured.

The diagram explains the key stages way in which milk is manufactured. jVR98

The diagram explains the key stages way in which milk is manufactured. Overall, producing milk process with 7 stages. It starts with cows eating grass in a field and ends with the delivery of milk to the supermarket. To begin with, cows eat grass in a field. The cows are taken to a place where they are milked by a milking machine twice a day. After the cows are milked, the milk is stored in large refrigeration storage to keep the milk fresh. Then, a milk tanker daily takes the milk from storage and delivers it to a dairy. At the dairy, milk is used in two ways. The amount of milk is used to produce cream, cheese, and butter. On the other hand, some of the milk is pasteurized and packaged into bottles. Finally, the finished products are taken with the delivery to the supermarkets and shops.

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