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percentage of jobless people

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The line chart illustrates how the percentage of jobless people in two countries, namely the US and Japan, altered over a period of 6 years. At first glance, it is clear that the percentage of unemployed people in the US is decreased. While this figure in Japan increased steadily. The unemployment rates of these two countries changed oppositely. The United States was at its peak in terms of unemployment in March 1993 at 7%. After that, it fell sharply until March 1995 and was at 5 5%. It finally, the rate reached its lowest point in March 1999 at 4%. In contrast, Japan touched the bottom degree of unemployed people in March 1993 with less than 2%. Then, it rose to 3. 5% in March 1996. And it reached a peak in March 1999 with 4. 6%.

The line chart illustrates how the percentage of jobless This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in two countries, namely
 the US and Japan, altered over a period of 6 years.

At first
 glance, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the percentage of unemployed This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the US is decreased
. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 this figure in Japan increased steadily
. The unemployment rates of these two countries This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
oppositely
.

The United States was at its peak in terms of unemployment in March 1993 at 7%. After that, it fell sharply
 until March 1995 and was at 5 5%. It finally
, the rate reached its lowest point in March 1999 at 4%.

In contrast
, Japan touched the bottom degree of unemployed This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in March 1993 with less than 2%. Then, it rose to 3. 5% in March 1996. And it reached a peak in March 1999 with 4. 6%. 