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Renewable energy consumption from year 1950 to 2008

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Increase of population and construction of mega cities has led the world to a huge energy crisis. Due to the global warming scientists are now searching for efficient renewable energy sources. Hydro power, wind, Biofuels, and wood are some of the widely used natural methods to generate power at present. The graph illustrates that the consumption of all these energy sources has escalated from year 1950 to year 2008. Energy produced from Biofuel and wind has begun from around 1981 and has increased, but both of those are at a very less usage level till 2008. However, usage has increased at a higher rate after year 2000. Even though wind power is free, it is the least used renewable energy source, and its amount is less than one Quadrillion Btu. Hydroelectric power and wood have covered most of the consumption with more than one Quadrillion Btu amount in all years from 1950 to 2008. Even though there are fluctuations in Hydroelectric power consumption, it is the highest except in few years in which usage of wood has passed. Usage of wood was greater than usage of Hydroelectric power in the years 1987, 1988 and 1989. There is a notable decrease of Hydro power usage from 1984 to 1988 and from 1996 to 2000. But it has eventually increased up to around 2. 5 Quadrallion Btu. Despite of small decreases in the amounts of the total consumption of renewable energy, it has drastically increased from 3 Quadrallion Btu to 7 Quadrallion Btu throughout the years from 1950 to 2008. Hence the consumption has become more than doubled after 58 years leaving the mankind to wonder what other energy sources, are available to satisfy the demand of the growing population.
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energy
crisis. Due to the global warming scientists are
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now
searching for efficient renewable
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energy
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sources
. Hydro
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power
, wind, Biofuels, and
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wood
are
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some of the
widely
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used
natural methods to generate
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power
at present. The graph illustrates that the
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consumption
of all these
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energy
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sources
has escalated from
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year
1950 to
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year
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2008. Energy
produced from Biofuel and wind has begun from around 1981 and has
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increased
,
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both of those are at a
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very
less
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usage
level till 2008.
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,
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usage
has
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increased
at a higher rate after
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year
2000.
Even though
wind
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power
is free, it is the least
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used
renewable
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energy
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source
, and its amount is less than one Quadrillion Btu.

Hydroelectric
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power
and
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wood
have covered most of the
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consumption
with more than one Quadrillion Btu
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amount
in all years from 1950 to 2008.
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there are fluctuations in Hydroelectric
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power
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consumption
, it is the highest except in few years in which
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usage
of
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wood
has passed.
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of
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wood
was greater than
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usage
of Hydroelectric
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power
in the years 1987, 1988 and 1989. There is a notable decrease of Hydro
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power
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usage
from 1984 to 1988 and from 1996 to 2000.
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it has
eventually
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increased
up to around 2. 5
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small
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consumption
of renewable
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, it has
drastically
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increased
from 3
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Btu to 7
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Btu throughout the years from 1950 to 2008.
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Hence
the
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consumption
has become more than doubled after 58 years leaving the mankind to wonder what other
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energy
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, are available to satisfy the demand of the growing population.

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