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The diagram illustrates the process by which pots are manufactured. Overall, it can be seen that there are 11 stages in this process, beginning with taking raw metarials and culminating in selling the end product to the public.

The diagram illustrates the process by which pots are manufactured. Overall, it can be seen that there are 11 stages in this process, beginning with taking raw metarials and culminating in selling the end product to the public. 2RW9j
The diagram illustrates the process by which pots are manufactured. Overall, it can be seen that there are 11 stages in this process, beginning with taking raw metarials and culminating in selling the end product to the public. At the first stage, raw metarials are took under ground by crane machine. Next, they are transported to a factory to categorize. where they are sorted and cleaned. After that this raw materials are put in the machine and crushed. in order to create pots they are mixed with water then pour them into a pattern. Next, they are dried from 4 to 6 hours. After to allow it to cool, they are assembled clay pots. The process continues with fevering into a oven 1. 000 degrees celsius. So as to pots have more beautiful colour they are dipped into a colour bucket. Then they are fired color in a oven to dry. Finally, they are finished pots after a processing long.
The diagram illustrates the process by which
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pots
are manufactured
.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that there are 11 stages in this process, beginning with taking raw
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metarials
and culminating in selling the
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end
product to the public.

At the
first
stage, raw
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metarials
are
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took
under ground by crane machine.
Next
, they
are transported
to a factory to categorize.
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where
they
are sorted
and cleaned. After that this raw materials
are put
in the machine and crushed.
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in
order to create
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pots
they
are mixed
with water then pour them into a pattern.
Next
, they
are dried
from 4 to 6 hours.

After to
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allow
it to cool, they
are assembled
clay
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pots
. The process continues with
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fevering
into
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a
oven 1. 000 degrees
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celsius
.
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So as to
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pots
have more
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beautiful
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colour
they
are dipped
into a
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colour
bucket. Then they
are fired
color in
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a
oven to dry.
Finally
, they
are finished
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pots
after a processing long.

IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process by which pots are manufactured. Overall, it can be seen that there are 11 stages in this process, beginning with taking raw metarials and culminating in selling the end product to the public.

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6.0
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