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Unemployment rates in three countries

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The line graph compares Spain, Germany and Italy in terms of unemployment rates between 1991 and 2005. Overall, the proportion of unemployment in Spain experienced a significant decrease after a considerable growth for the first two years. However, there were sharp ups and downs in the same figure for Italy followed by a peak at the end of the given period. On the other, the percentage of the unemployed in Germany in 2005 came back to what it was in 1991. From 1991 to 1993 the index for people without jobs in Spain rose sharply to 18 percent from just over 12 percent before keeping unchanged for the next two years. However, the figure in the same country, then, started to decline falling to the stable level of about 8 percent between 2003 and 2005. On the other hand, the percentage of the unemployed Italians experienced a gradual rise to 12 percent in 1997, though there was a stability during the next three years. However, the index decreased accounting for about 9 percent in 2005. As far as the Dutch is concerned, the percentage of the unemployed was equal to 4 percent in 1991. However, from that time until 2001 the figure showed great variations before reaching a high of 11 percent 4 years later.
The line graph compares Spain, Germany and Italy in terms of unemployment rates between 1991 and 2005.

Overall
, the proportion of unemployment in Spain experienced a significant decrease after a considerable growth for the
first
two years.
However
, there were sharp ups and downs in the same figure for Italy followed by a peak at the
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end
of the
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given
period. On the other, the percentage of the unemployed in Germany in 2005 came back to what it was in 1991.

From 1991 to 1993 the index for
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people
without jobs in Spain rose
sharply
to 18
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percent
from
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just
over 12
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percent
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before
keeping unchanged for the
next
two years.
However
, the figure in the same country, then,
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started
to decline falling to the stable level of about 8
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percent
between 2003 and 2005.

On the other hand
, the percentage of the unemployed Italians experienced a gradual rise to 12
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percent
in 1997, though there was a stability during the
next
three years.
However
, the index decreased accounting for about 9
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percent
in 2005.

As far as the Dutch
is concerned
, the percentage of the unemployed was equal to 4
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percent
in 1991.
However
, from that time until 2001 the figure
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showed
great variations
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before
reaching a high of 11
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4 years later.

IELTS academic Unemployment rates in three countries

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