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Recent academic research has shown that science subjects in high schools and colleges are becoming less popular than before. What do you think are the causes of this? What will be the effects?

Recent academic research has shown that science subjects in high schools and colleges are becoming less popular than before. What do you think are the causes of this? What will be the effects? 2xxw6
Science subjects in universities and colleges became less common these days than before. This essay is a discussion about the causes and the effects of this problem. Firstly, the difficulty of lessons is making it less common, that means science is herder to learn and finish. That's why students get bored and give up. Although this depends on their teachers. They must lecture them in an easy way to understand. Teachers should let their students free to discover this subject. Don't make them learn everything in the lesson, make them learn what they want to learn. moreover, the thinks of many students affect t this. There are many students who think they can't be successful in science. and also, there are so few jobs that need knowledge about science. We have to change their think and make more jobs like scientists to impress students. In short, science subjects are important but not enough postgraduate. that's why we need to solve all the problems that stop students from learning this.
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. This essay is a discussion about the causes and the effects of this problem.

Firstly
, the difficulty of lessons is making it less common, that means
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science
is herder to learn and finish. That's why
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students
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get
bored and give up.
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this depends on their teachers. They
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lecture them
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in an easy way
to understand. Teachers should
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let
their
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students
free to discover this subject. Don't
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make
them learn everything in the lesson,
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make
them learn what they want to learn.

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moreover
, the
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of
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many
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students
affect t this. There are
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many
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students
who
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they can't be successful in
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science
.
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and
also
, there are
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few jobs that need knowledge about
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science
. We
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have to
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change
their
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think
and
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make
more jobs like scientists to impress students.

In short,
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science
subjects are
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important
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but
not
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enough
postgraduate.
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that
's why we need to solve all the problems that
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from learning this.
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IELTS academic Recent academic research has shown that science subjects in high schools and colleges are becoming less popular than before. What do you think are the causes of this? What will be the effects?

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169 words
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