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reasons for people to quit smoking and when they tend to give it up.

reasons for people to quit smoking and when they tend to give it up. ORp5j
The two tables together illustrates the reasons for people to quit smoking and when they tend to give it up. As many as 71% people want to stop smoking due to their health conditions. They all want a better health in general. Similarly, 25% people want to avoid smoking to have less risk of getting smoke related health issues. The other reasons for people wanting to quit smoking are due to their present health problems as well as financial considerations. Almost 16% smokers are pressurised by their family to quit smoking. According to the second table, 71% people intend to give up smoking and 12% people want to quit smoking immediately within the next month. 35% people want to quit smoking slowly within the next 6 months. However almost 21% people want to quit it within the next year. However 29% people are in no rush to give up smoking.
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and when they tend to give it up.

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due to their
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conditions. They all
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people
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to have less
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of getting smoke related
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issues. The other reasons for
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are due to their present
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pressurised
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smoking.

According to the second table, 71%
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intend to give up
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and 12%
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immediately within the
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people
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smoking
slowly
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are in no rush to give up
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IELTS academic reasons for people to quit smoking and when they tend to give it up.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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