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The given Bar graph tells us, the percentages of various items exported in 2005 from Fantasia. It can be clearly seen that oil is the highest exported item in 2005, where as Rubber was the least exported among all. It shows that oil is ranking high in export among all other goods such as rubber, tea, cotton, coffee and paper, with a a percentage of 35. Whereas Rubber is the least sold item in 2005, which is just 5% of the total. It can be found that, Cotton and Papper are two items, that has been exported in equal percentage, which is 15% of the total. The figures illustrate that coffee has got a little lesser demand compared to tea, the amount of tea that has been exported is the second highest among other ingredients for the year infact. The demand for tea was 20%, where as the demand for coffee was 15%. Surprisingly, It can be clearly seen that none of the items sold were of more than 35% of the total items.
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Bar graph
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us, the percentages of various
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items
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exported
in 2005 from Fantasia. It can be
clearly
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seen
that oil is the highest
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exported
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item
in 2005,
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where as
Rubber was the least
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exported
among all.

It
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shows
that oil is ranking high in export among all other
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goods
such as rubber,
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tea
, cotton, coffee and paper, with
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a a
percentage of 35. Whereas Rubber is the least sold
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item
in 2005, which is
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just
5% of the total.

It can
be found
that, Cotton and
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Papper
are two
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items
, that has been
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exported
in equal percentage, which is 15% of the total. The figures illustrate that coffee has
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got
a
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little
lesser demand compared to
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tea
, the amount of
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tea
that has been
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exported
is the second highest among other ingredients for the year
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infact
. The demand for
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tea
was 20%,
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where as
the demand for coffee was 15%.

Surprisingly
, It can be
clearly
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seen
that none of the
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items
sold were of more than 35% of the total
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items
.
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IELTS academic Reading text was bit easy I felt in terms of vocabulary compare to what's there in that book

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  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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