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How do we save the forest from deforestation?

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Everyone would to know this well about deforestation in the world, This is a big problem that should be resolved quickly. Because deforestation make problem to world such as Flood, Forest fire and the big problem is Global warming that is season why we should do something. The first thing you should do is reduce the use of paper, Although in present do not use paper more than a part because technology come to daily life but everyday more people use paper a lot so we should do is reduce the use of paper because 1 paper = 17 trees. The second thing you should do promote about disadvantage of deforestation to another people for them know and save the world. The last thing you should legislation to control competitiveness to punish the wrongdoer for to stop those acts that are sent wrong to the world. As a result everybody can save the forest from deforestation and save the world just do something as i said and the important is plant a tree to replace lost trees.

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deforestation
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people
 for them know and save the world.

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