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how to reduce global warming.

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In everyday right now, the environment is a worse. We have a problem a lot it is a global warming which is caused by many reasons such as deforestation, plastic bag, use a car a lot and other. And today I want talk about plastic bag and solution about it. Plastic bag is a big problem in the world, it is very short service life it's mostly a one-time use and no recycle so we use the cloth bag for fix problem. The cloth bag have a lot of benefit as a first reduces soil and water degradation due to plastic bag waste when it becomes small and more slowly decomposed will become polluted waste from insertion in soil layer and contaminate water causing the quality of soil and water to deteriorate. The second the cloth bag can be recycle, go back, convenient to carry and can carry more weight than plastic bags. And the last use of cloth bags has a beautiful and fashion taste and designed according to the user. The benefit that I talk it's just part of all the benefits. In conclusion I think the use the cloth bag is a great and to save the world so please use the cloth bag when you go to shopping for save the time to world.
In
everyday
right
now
, the environment is a worse. We have a problem a lot it is a global warming which
is caused
by
many
reasons such as deforestation,
plastic
bag
,
use
a car a lot and other. And
today
I want talk about
plastic
bag
and solution about it.

Plastic
bag
is a
big
problem in the world, it is
very
short service life it's
mostly
a one-time
use
and no recycle
so
we
use
the
cloth
bag
for
fix
problem. The
cloth
bag
have
a lot of
benefit as a
first
reduces
soil and water degradation due to
plastic
bag
waste when it becomes
small
and more
slowly
decomposed will become polluted waste from insertion in soil layer and contaminate water causing the quality of soil and water to deteriorate. The second the
cloth
bag
can be
recycle
, go back, convenient to carry and can carry more weight than
plastic
bags
. And the last
use
of
cloth
bags
has a
beautiful
and fashion taste and designed according to the user. The benefit that I talk it's
just
part of all the benefits.

In
conclusion I
think
the
use
the
cloth
bag
is a great and to save the world
so
please
use
the
cloth
bag
when you go to shopping for save the time to world.
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IELTS academic how to reduce global warming.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
218 words
6.0
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