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The chart below shows information about the favorite subjects of 60 students.

The chart below shows information about the favorite subjects of 60 students. m8VWK
The given bar chart demonstrates totally 60 pupils who prefer subjects at both school A and school B. Overall, almost the number of students in school B seems to be higher than school A, but in categories Science and Sport, students in school B are more than the other. At the beginning, the number of students at school A like Social Science is six, while there are ten students in School B like this subject. Next, the numbers of students who love Language and Craft/ Drawing in School B are respectively 18 and 25. However, there are in order for only five and four. It mean that quantities of students in School B who prefer these subjects are approximately threefold and six-time the pupils of school A. In contrast, there are two subjects preferred by students in School A are more than students in School B. They are Science and Sport. In Science, there are only two pupils of School B like it, whilst students of School A have nine people. More impressive, there is a discrepancy between the number of pupils of students in School A and School B, the latter has only 5 students, while the former just over sevenfold, up to 36 students.
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A and
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in categories
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and Sport,
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B are more than the other.

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A like Social
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B like this
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. More impressive, there is a discrepancy between the
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about the favorite subjects of 60 students.

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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