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Rainwater collected for the use of drinking water

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The diagram illustrates how an Australian town collects rainwater to process in order to use as drinking water. Overall, rainwater collected from houses can be used as drinking water after it has been processed by treating it with chemicals and filtering processes. Initially, the rainwater which is collected by the gutter and then runs the pipe down to the side of the house into the drain. Each house collects the rainwater in the similar fashion and then it is sent to the water filterer through the underground pipes. The rainwater passes through the water filter where it is filtered of its impurities. Once it has been filtered, it continues along the pipes to a storage tank and then to a water treatment tank. In the water treatment tank, it is treated with many chemicals in order to make it fit for the consumption. When the water is fit for drinking it is sent back to the houses through a different set of underground pipes where people can use it for different purposes.
The diagram illustrates how an Australian town collects
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rainwater
to process in order to
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use
as drinking water.

Overall
,
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rainwater
collected from
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houses
can be
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used
as drinking
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water
after it has
been processed
by treating it with chemicals and filtering processes.

Initially
, the
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rainwater
which
is collected
by the gutter and then runs the pipe down to the side of the
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house
into the drain. Each
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house
collects the
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rainwater
in the similar fashion and then it is
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sent
to the
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water
filterer through the underground pipes.

The
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rainwater
passes through the
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water
filter where it
is filtered
of its impurities. Once it has
been filtered
, it continues along the pipes to a storage tank and then to a
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water
treatment tank. In the
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water
treatment tank, it
is treated
with
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many
chemicals in order to
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make
it fit for the consumption. When the
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water
is fit
for drinking it is
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sent
back to the
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houses
through a
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different
set of underground pipes where
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people
can
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use
it for
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different
purposes.
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IELTS academic Rainwater collected for the use of drinking water

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6.5
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