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Divorce rate in Europen countries

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Bar graph provides information about divorce rates two European countries during the period from 2011 to 2015. Overall, it is clear seen that Sweden experienced a downward trend, while Finland showed an upward trend throughout the period. Let's look at first Sweden's rate was about 45% in 2011 and then rose to almost 50% in 2012. However, the figure showed a gradual decline to roughly 47 % in 2013, and continued its downward trend more steadily to the end of the period, reaching around 45% in 2014 and hitting a low point of about 37% in 2015. In contrast, Percentage of divorces in Finland was less than 40% in 2011, before decreasing in 2012. Whereas, this number experienced a slight growth during the next two years which reached about 39 % in 2013 and then rose to around 3% again in 2014, but later remained steady for the next year, outracing the rate of Sweden.
Bar graph provides information about divorce rates two European countries during the period from 2011 to 2015.

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that Sweden experienced a downward trend, while Finland
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an upward trend throughout the period.

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Sweden's rate was about 45% in 2011 and then rose to almost 50% in 2012.
However
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a gradual decline to roughly 47 % in 2013, and continued its downward trend more
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of the period, reaching around 45% in 2014 and hitting a low point of about 37% in 2015.

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decreasing in 2012. Whereas, this number experienced a slight growth during the
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later remained steady for the
next
year, outracing the rate of Sweden.
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