Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Proportion of Energy from Renewable and Non-renewable power

Proportion of Energy from Renewable and Non-renewable power 2xbn6

These two pie charts illustrated the proportion of the energy cultivated from various resources in a country in 1985 and 2003. During this period, the percentage of each resource had slight changes. A number of factors had increased, while some of them had showed a downward trend. When you focus on the type of resources which had shown considerable growth toward 2003, they are natural gas, coal other renewable type of energy. Whereas, the percentage of nuclear and oil diminished. The ratio of the sum of the two accounted for almost three quarters on the contrary that of 2003 dropped to about a half. From these facts, you can find a trend in this graph. Clearly, the less hazardous energy which are environmental friendly are natural gas, hydrogen, and other renewable source type. They are eco-friendly power supply compared to nuclear and oil. Nowadays, a number of people have pay attention to environmental problem. Due to this mentality, it will motivate them to utilize the renewable ones rather than the non-renewable sources that pose threat to humanity.

These two pie charts illustrated the proportion of the energy cultivated from various resources in a country in 1985 and 2003.

During this period, the percentage of each resource had slight This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
. A number of factors had increased, while This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of them had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a downward trend.

When you focus on the type of resources which had shown considerable growth toward 2003, they are natural gas, coal other renewable type of energy.

Whereas, the percentage of nuclear and oil diminished. The ratio of the sum of the two accounted for almost three quarters on the contrary
 that of 2003 dropped to about a half.

From these facts, you can find a trend in this graph. Clearly
, the less hazardous energy which are environmental friendly are natural gas, hydrogen, and other renewable source type.

They are eco-friendly power supply compared to nuclear and oil.

Nowadays, a number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have pay attention to environmental problem. Due to this mentality, it will motivate them to utilize the renewable ones rather
 than the non-renewable sources that pose threat to humanity. 