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THE MAP BELOW SHOW THE VILALGE OF STOKEFORD IN 1930 AND 2010.

THE MAP BELOW SHOW THE VILALGE OF STOKEFORD IN 1930 AND 2010. VPBJD
THE PROVIDED MAPS ILLUSTRATES VARIOUS CHANGES EXPERIENCED BY THE VILLAGE OF STOKEFORD IN EIGHT YEARS FROM1930 TO 2010. OVERALL, THE STOKEFORD VILLAGE FACED SIGNIFICANT CHANGES AND MORE FACILITIES INTRODUCED IN GIVEN PERIOD. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, IN NORTH-EAST SIDE OF PLAN THE FARMLAND IN FORMER LAYOUT REPLACED WITH CONSTRUCTION OF NUMBER OF HOUSES MERELY BELOW THE BRIDGE WHILE, IN NORTH-WEST SIDE THE SHOPS WERE DEMOLISHED AND NUMBEROUS HOUSES WERE BUILT IN SIMILAR PLACE IN FINAL PLAN. THE AREA FOR LARGE HOME WITH GARDEN DIMINISHES IN EIGHT DECADES AND RENAMED AS RETIREMENT HOME. THE MAP FURTHER COLLATE THAT, IN 1930, THE FARMLAND IN SOUTH-WEST OF PLAN DEMOLISHED IN 2010 AND NUMBER OF HUTS WERE INTRODUCED NEAR RIVER STROKE WHEREAS, THE NUMBER OF HOUSES IS CONSTRUCTED IN FINAL LAYOUT IN OPPOSITE TO POST OFFICE. THE POST OFFICE AND PRIMARY SCHOOL REMAIN CONSTANT IN GIVEN TIME.
THE PROVIDED MAPS
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ILLUSTRATES
VARIOUS
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CHANGES
EXPERIENCED BY THE VILLAGE OF
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STOKEFORD
IN EIGHT YEARS FROM1930 TO 2010.

OVERALL
, THE
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STOKEFORD
VILLAGE FACED SIGNIFICANT
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CHANGES
AND MORE FACILITIES INTRODUCED IN
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GIVEN
PERIOD.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT, IN NORTH-EAST SIDE OF PLAN THE FARMLAND IN FORMER LAYOUT REPLACED WITH CONSTRUCTION OF NUMBER OF
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HOUSES
MERELY
BELOW THE BRIDGE WHILE, IN NORTH-WEST SIDE THE SHOPS
WERE DEMOLISHED
AND
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NUMBEROUS
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HOUSES
WERE BUILT
IN SIMILAR PLACE IN FINAL PLAN. THE AREA FOR LARGE HOME WITH GARDEN DIMINISHES IN EIGHT DECADES AND RENAMED AS RETIREMENT HOME.

THE MAP
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, IN 1930, THE FARMLAND IN SOUTH-WEST OF PLAN DEMOLISHED IN 2010 AND NUMBER OF HUTS
WERE INTRODUCED
NEAR RIVER STROKE WHEREAS, THE NUMBER OF
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HOUSES
IS CONSTRUCTED
IN FINAL LAYOUT IN OPPOSITE TO POST OFFICE.
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THE
POST OFFICE AND PRIMARY SCHOOL REMAIN CONSTANT IN
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GIVEN
TIME.

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